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Interminable love......Part 1

2009.11.19

She used the key that he gave her 3 years ago to let herself in...Today was their anniversary and she wanted to cook him a nice dinner before he got home...It had been 2 years since they had ended their relationship but she just knew he hadn’t gotten over the breakup... It seemed so petty now that she thought about it, but he was a little more sensitive than she was and so, the argument they had that last night together had erupted into a full blown wrestling match, and after the police had come, and arrested the both of them, he was the one who decided that it was best for them not to get back together again....But she had gone out of her way to checked up on him from time to time...and whenever he saw her, he always had that sad look in his eye...and their short, awkward conversations let her know that he still hadn’t gotten over their breakup....So she decided to take it upon herself to try and rekindle the relationship...because he needed her, and she needed him too....

As she walked into the kitchen, she saw a vase of pink roses...and a small card, embedded in the arrangement. She opened it and it read “ To the woman I’ll always love..” Her heart began to flutter... “How did he know I would be coming tonight?” she thought to herself and began to get excited “Maybe he remembers our anniversary and wants to get back together, just as much as I do” she tells herself.... She puts the bag of groceries down on the kitchen counter and begins to look for the kitchen knives....she remembered how he hated to have them out on the counter...how trivial now that she thought about it, and laughed softly to herself...She liked the big knife with the rubber handle....she could grip it better and it never slipped out of her hand...sometimes, in the past, when cooking for him, she would always end up cutting herself and it annoyed him that she was so clumsy.....ahhh, found it. The knife was all the way in the back of the drawer with the silverware...he still hadn’t thrown it out....you see that was another indication that he hadn’t gotten over her....

As dinner was cooking, she decided to go and check out his bedroom....When they were together, she always complained about how manly his room was....she used to buy fluffy pillows and comforter sets that added a softer look to the room, a more feminine look, but sometimes he fussed about the colors and would change the covers back to the previous set he had on there....but tonight, he had such lovely colors adorning the room.....There was a soft lilac comforter on the bed, with great big down pillows and a sheer canopy hanging over the top of the frame... she couldn’t contain her happiness “He’s been planning this all along” she said breathlessly to herself....then she glides over to his closet and turns on the light...He added more closet space and on one side of the closet were women’s clothing....she walked over to the rack of clothes and noticed that they were all the same size that she wore. The style was not necessarily what she would wear but guys never really ever could pick out the right clothes for their girlfriends or wives...she did see a night gown that was a pretty silky eggshell white and decided to try it on.... It felt so cool and smooth to her skin, and suddenly she felt herself go flush....maybe they will have a night of romance to help reignite the passion that they once felt for each other......she smiled slyly to herself....she’d been waiting for this night for a long time....

To Be Continued........
30 Comments
slowpete you are a romantic at hart ;-)
nicely done with this
slowpete · 2009-11-18: 22:55
azuul love it!
azuul · 2009-11-18: 23:58
noptek Lovely red
noptek · 2009-11-19: 03:57
ypslon so, so , so BEAUTIFUL and lovely
ypslon · 2009-11-19: 05:11
lynnsgallery2 GORGEOUS!!! Beautiful done with the pop of red...you are a first-rate writer...looking forward to part 2 :))
lynnsgallery2 · 2009-11-19: 06:03
hansbeck thx for your comment. Ive been looking through your photos. Incredible. I love the colors in the raindrop photos.
hansbeck · 2009-11-19: 06:53
LysMandala Spectacular! I love the sensitivity you have and as the input on your photos. Congratulations
LysMandala · 2009-11-19: 07:25
nirol I'm waiting excitedly for part 2! Beautiful red roses!
nirol · 2009-11-19: 09:09
agnes65 Beautiful !!!!.............lokking forward to part 2 :)))
agnes65 · 2009-11-19: 09:10
tedbarlow Ohh, how exciting !!
tedbarlow · 2009-11-19: 09:27
Ryana ... Lovely ... !!!!
Ryana · 2009-11-19: 09:53
strangestagain love it! great contrast!
strangestagain · 2009-11-19: 10:05
tracyseeger Beautiful shot!
tracyseeger · 2009-11-19: 11:51
DAMihaela I really love it !!! Beautiful flowers ;)
Great!
DAMihaela · 2009-11-19: 12:59
Ryana I hope for her that he is not expecting someone else ... ;^o
Ryana · 2009-11-19: 15:39
TheBigHush @ Ryana's comment : if he is expecting someone else... at least she found her old knife!

nice colouring (as usual) but I still think it's more effective done sparingly... but that's just me of course :)
TheBigHush · 2009-11-19: 16:04
Eiram great story! but I am dreading the second part:))
Eiram · 2009-11-19: 16:10
cciotti Great stuff!
cciotti · 2009-11-19: 16:47
Clickpen Preciosa.
Clickpen · 2009-11-19: 16:49
kodachromelives you are cool
kodachromelives · 2009-11-19: 20:11
bedazzled now that's something I would read..so tomorrow no ghosts, yayyy..tell us soon what happened :)
bedazzled · 2009-11-19: 20:31
BuffyEyes Romantic memories.
BuffyEyes · 2009-11-19: 21:09
ainul very nice!
ainul · 2009-11-19: 22:33
pandka Lovely and exciting, I am afraid it will be without happy end...
pandka · 2009-11-20: 05:05
Basia Beautiful pickture of flowers.
Basia · 2009-11-20: 09:58
yuflower great capture !
yuflower · 2009-11-20: 18:09
azarnajo wooooooooooooooooooooow i love it friend!!! great shot!!
azarnajo · 2009-11-20: 22:41
Kozuka Stunning. :)
Kozuka · 2009-11-21: 15:51
miltonjacob that foto is superb! (sorry that i could not hang on for the story!! :)
miltonjacob · 2009-11-21: 17:40
Taosmyway Let'sv definitely have a drink together !
Taosmyway · 2009-11-25: 03:25
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